I'm Glad that you are proud that you are a dancer, as a fellow dancer I understand how happy you are. There is one word that is spelt wrong- token? taken. I wish this was a little bit longer and more about the history of your dancing.
Overall let the music take you away!
I am glad that you are so passionate about dancing. Continue to do what you love Jaylynn
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.